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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 4:32:43 GMT
For those of you who don't know (everyone on this forum), I'm writing a book. I have the plot and everything, just need to do some revising. I am planning on it being a part of a trilogy. And while the first book isn't really related to military, the other ones are going to be super military rated. Here is my first paragraph, still under revising: "Anachronism, or something that doesn’t belong chronologically. Several years ago the biggest anachronism-collection took place. There were so many things that had no sense to them, creatures, technology, and even weather cycles were out of place. This later became known as “The Great Anachronism” and it changed the universe. It caused the biggest war known to man-kind. But the thing that made The Great Anachronism so great, was not the fact that it caused a war, not the fact that due to it millions of species were born, but instead the fact that it changed the concept of reality. Once it happened people thought differently and became different, just like me. This is my story, my name is Malcolm Darklock and this is how I was changed."
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 5:21:19 GMT
By the way, I'm open to constructive criticism. I am also thinking of adding major plot points.
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Post by Franz von Hipper on Aug 29, 2016 5:29:07 GMT
For those of you who don't know (everyone on this forum), I'm writing a book. I have the plot and everything, just need to do some revising. I am planning on it being a part of a trilogy. And while the first book isn't really related to military, the other ones are going to be super military rated. Here is my first paragraph, still under revising: "Anachronism, or something that doesn’t belong chronologically. Several years ago the biggest anachronism-collection took place. There were so many things that had no sense to them, creatures, technology, and even weather cycles were out of place. This later became known as “The Great Anachronism” and it changed the universe. It caused the biggest war known to man-kind. But the thing that made The Great Anachronism so great, was not the fact that it caused a war, not the fact that due to it millions of species were born, but instead the fact that it changed the concept of reality. Once it happened people thought differently and became different, just like me. This is my story, my name is Malcolm Darklock and this is how I was changed." Ohhh so much Anachronism. But looks good |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 6:02:22 GMT
For those of you who don't know (everyone on this forum), I'm writing a book. I have the plot and everything, just need to do some revising. I am planning on it being a part of a trilogy. And while the first book isn't really related to military, the other ones are going to be super military rated. Here is my first paragraph, still under revising: "Anachronism, or something that doesn’t belong chronologically. Several years ago the biggest anachronism-collection took place. There were so many things that had no sense to them, creatures, technology, and even weather cycles were out of place. This later became known as “The Great Anachronism” and it changed the universe. It caused the biggest war known to man-kind. But the thing that made The Great Anachronism so great, was not the fact that it caused a war, not the fact that due to it millions of species were born, but instead the fact that it changed the concept of reality. Once it happened people thought differently and became different, just like me. This is my story, my name is Malcolm Darklock and this is how I was changed." Ohhh so much Anachronism. But looks good It only said it 4 times. And it rarely uses the word again for the whole novel. |
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Post by Napoleon Bonaparte on Aug 29, 2016 6:06:44 GMT
Well I'm looking Forward to this book.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 6:08:38 GMT
It starts in 2247, but quickly skips to the major story in 2263/64. My favorite character isn't mentioned until the last chapter, unfortunately. However he is the main villain of the second book.
Phillip Shalek: Expert at all things tank. Has a tank so thick that it can withstand multiple nukes to the surface. The main general of a military-oriented civilization. He watched the man he loved get assassinated, which opened a new position for mayor. He assassinated the next contender, and took the position.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 6:09:16 GMT
Well I'm looking Forward to this book. I truly hope you'll read it when it comes out!  |
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Post by Franz von Hipper on Aug 29, 2016 6:12:40 GMT
It starts in 2247, but quickly skips to the major story in 2263/64. My favorite character isn't mentioned until the last chapter, unfortunately. However he is the main villain of the second book. Phillip Shalek: Expert at all things tank. Has a tank so thick that it can withstand multiple nukes to the surface. The main general of a military-oriented civilization. He watched the man he loved get assassinated, which opened a new position for mayor. He assassinated the next contender, and took the position. Does this tank possess a weakness, there must be a way to destroy it? |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 6:15:53 GMT
It starts in 2247, but quickly skips to the major story in 2263/64. My favorite character isn't mentioned until the last chapter, unfortunately. However he is the main villain of the second book. Phillip Shalek: Expert at all things tank. Has a tank so thick that it can withstand multiple nukes to the surface. The main general of a military-oriented civilization. He watched the man he loved get assassinated, which opened a new position for mayor. He assassinated the next contender, and took the position. Does this tank possess a weakness, there must be a way to destroy it? The tank isn't what gets the power. There are special objects that are scattered and give special power. He has the Diamond of Good Fortune, and with it, he can raise the chance of resisting a nuke. But Shalek is supposed to win for a long time. |
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Post by Franz von Hipper on Aug 29, 2016 6:18:57 GMT
Does this tank possess a weakness, there must be a way to destroy it? The tank isn't what gets the power. There are special objects that are scattered and give special power. He has the Diamond of Good Fortune, and with it, he can raise the chance of resisting a nuke. But Shalek is supposed to win for a long time. I guess just remember that nothing is ever perfect. |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 29, 2016 6:21:17 GMT
The tank isn't what gets the power. There are special objects that are scattered and give special power. He has the Diamond of Good Fortune, and with it, he can raise the chance of resisting a nuke. But Shalek is supposed to win for a long time. I guess just remember that nothing is ever perfect. Without the diamond, it couldn't withstand a single nuke. |
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Post by Mountbatten on Aug 29, 2016 6:47:27 GMT
Cool, I hope you can successfully get it published and reap some of the rewards of being an author.
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Post by Tito on Aug 29, 2016 6:53:16 GMT
Well I'm looking Forward to this book. Same |
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Post by Franz von Hipper on Aug 29, 2016 12:50:00 GMT
Well I'm looking Forward to this book. Same Same |
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Post by Tito on Aug 29, 2016 12:55:24 GMT
Cool, I hope you can successfully get it published and reap some of the rewards of being an author. Aww man I am not the only author here |
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